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« on: February 04, 2005, 04:30:37 pm »

Just looking out of the window inspires this.


Angry sky with leaden belly, be still, don't make me blue.


The night draws in, soon enough, without this fiendish hue.


I want to see your bright blue smile, just like the other day.


At least just yield to the setting sun, don't end the day this way.


 


 


 


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« Reply #1 on: February 04, 2005, 08:25:43 pm »
Em I'll stick to Phillip Larkin if you don't mind.
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« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2005, 11:17:48 pm »
I think bountys poem is saying he doesnt want it to rain.
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« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2005, 11:23:14 pm »
I'm sure it's very profound.
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« Reply #4 on: February 05, 2005, 07:53:36 am »
 
Quote from: oldspice
Em I'll stick to Phillip Larkin if you don't mind.


       

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« Reply #5 on: February 05, 2005, 08:09:05 am »

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« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2005, 09:41:35 pm »
poetry is boring

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« Reply #8 on: February 05, 2005, 09:56:31 pm »
not always.
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« Reply #9 on: February 07, 2005, 11:09:44 am »
I go with Lou there, it's not always. Some poems you can't understand whereas others a beautiful and others tell a story.

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« Reply #10 on: February 07, 2005, 11:36:49 am »
So which category does Bounty's come into?  (I would like to add here that whatever the answer it's still better than anything I've written!)
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« Reply #11 on: February 07, 2005, 12:20:56 pm »
It's not one of my best, but it reflected my thoughts at the time.

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« Reply #12 on: February 07, 2005, 12:39:11 pm »
I think you poem is lovely yes. I like the words

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« Reply #13 on: February 07, 2005, 05:50:39 pm »
frooty do you have any ideas of what bountys poem was about?
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« Reply #14 on: February 07, 2005, 05:54:24 pm »
Aw Bounty it was beautiful really. Much more cheery than Phillip Larkin.
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