A simple poem

Sunset

‘Oh sky of fire!’

the promise the wonder,

the shepherd’s desire, neither hail nor thunder,

we take the time to drink in your light,

no time to idle so soon comes the night.

[loulou]

What's with all the poetry threads bounty?

[kevvosa]

It's for Phyllis, he's tyrying to woo her. 

I told Kevvosa I write poetry and he said he bet they were all smutty ones.  This is to prove they're not. 

[Jamsi]

Sunset

‘Oh sky of fire!’

the promise the wonder,

the shepherd’s desire, neither hail nor thunder,

we take the time to drink in your light,

no time to idle so soon comes the night.

That's the one I sent you Bounty!

[loulou]

Bounty why not stick them all together on one thread.

[oldspice]

I told Kevvosa I write poetry and he said he bet they were all smutty ones.  This is to prove they're not. 

Sorry, but you're not exactly Keats, are you?

Sunset

‘Oh sky of fire!’

the promise the wonder,

the shepherd’s desire, neither hail nor thunder,

we take the time to drink in your light,

no time to idle so soon comes the night.

That's the one I sent you Bounty

No it isn't I'm not a plagiarist

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[loulou]