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A sad poem about love
« on: July 15, 2006, 12:08:04 am »

The futility of love


With every flake of snow that falls


my heart cries out for you,


 


For every bright star that twinkles so


I have more love to show,


 


No names or words can make me real


only feelings in their time,


 


The flowers of your heart so sweet


they lift my heart divine,


 


Perhaps my memories take their place


among life's faded scrolls,


 


I love you more than all the surf


in every wave that rolls,


 


Please don't be bitter, don't be sad


forgive my foolish ways,


 


Love knows no rules, no written words


in eternity it stays.

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« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2006, 12:43:00 am »
Did you write that for me bounty?
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« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2006, 02:13:17 am »
Are you a schoolgirl lou? 
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« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2006, 02:15:13 am »
How sad.  I'm crying now.
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« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2006, 02:16:39 am »
Oh come on, it's very sloppily written amateur mush 
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« Reply #5 on: July 15, 2006, 07:46:08 am »

Quote from: loulou
Did you write that for me bounty?


No I didn't but it covers everything.


Kevvosa, thankyou.  I love you too

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« Reply #6 on: July 15, 2006, 09:53:06 am »
Bounty I saw what you wrote before the edit, and fair do.



Phyllis, did you really cry?


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« Reply #7 on: July 15, 2006, 09:55:01 am »
I thought I was mean, so I editted it out.  No offence meant.
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« Reply #8 on: July 15, 2006, 09:55:59 am »
None taken, none meant. 
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« Reply #9 on: July 15, 2006, 10:15:26 am »
Yes.
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« Reply #10 on: July 15, 2006, 10:19:21 am »
You're right Bounty. It is a sad poem.
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« Reply #11 on: July 15, 2006, 10:28:36 am »
Written when I was low. 
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« Reply #12 on: July 15, 2006, 11:40:21 am »
I hope you're high now.
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« Reply #13 on: July 15, 2006, 11:43:16 am »
Better yes.  Still get low from time to time. It's inevitable when you're sensitive like me.
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« Reply #14 on: July 15, 2006, 11:44:15 am »
We all have our highs and lows. 
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