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Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: on July 15, 2006, 12:08:04 am

The futility of love

With every flake of snow that falls

my heart cries out for you,

 

For every bright star that twinkles so

I have more love to show,

 

No names or words can make me real

only feelings in their time,

 

The flowers of your heart so sweet

they lift my heart divine,

 

Perhaps my memories take their place

among life's faded scrolls,

 

I love you more than all the surf

in every wave that rolls,

 

Please don't be bitter, don't be sad

forgive my foolish ways,

 

Love knows no rules, no written words

in eternity it stays.

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: loulou on July 15, 2006, 12:43:00 am

Did you write that for me bounty?

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: kevvosa on July 15, 2006, 02:13:17 am

Are you a schoolgirl lou? 

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: phyllisbermann on July 15, 2006, 02:15:13 am

How sad.  I'm crying now.

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: kevvosa on July 15, 2006, 02:16:39 am

Oh come on, it's very sloppily written amateur mush 

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: on July 15, 2006, 07:46:08 am

Quote from: loulou

Did you write that for me bounty?

No I didn't but it covers everything.

Kevvosa, thankyou.  I love you too

bounty hunter38913.3465972222

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: kevvosa on July 15, 2006, 09:53:06 am

Bounty I saw what you wrote before the edit, and fair do.



Phyllis, did you really cry?

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: on July 15, 2006, 09:55:01 am

I thought I was mean, so I editted it out.  No offence meant.

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Post by: kevvosa on July 15, 2006, 09:55:59 am

None taken, none meant. 

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Post by: phyllisbermann on July 15, 2006, 10:15:26 am

Yes.

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: oldspice on July 15, 2006, 10:19:21 am

You're right Bounty. It is a sad poem.

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: on July 15, 2006, 10:28:36 am

Written when I was low. 

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Post by: phyllisbermann on July 15, 2006, 11:40:21 am

I hope you're high now.

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Post by: on July 15, 2006, 11:43:16 am

Better yes.  Still get low from time to time. It's inevitable when you're sensitive like me.

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Post by: kevvosa on July 15, 2006, 11:44:15 am

We all have our highs and lows. 

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: on July 15, 2006, 11:45:24 am

That's true.  I'm not a depressive I just feel things deeply.

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: phyllisbermann on July 15, 2006, 03:14:30 pm

Hope you're more cheery now.

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Post by: on July 15, 2006, 03:19:03 pm

Yes, I'm on top form today. It's quite sunny in Nether Chumley. 

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Post by: loulou on July 16, 2006, 01:19:22 am

It's very depressing isn't it.

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Post by: goldencup on July 16, 2006, 08:37:25 am

Love is never futile.

l

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Post by: loulou on July 16, 2006, 11:39:25 pm

so when someone dumps you bounty you write a poem?

Title: A sad poem about love
Post by: on July 17, 2006, 10:41:49 am

I wasn't dumped, don't make assumptions.

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Post by: loulou on July 17, 2006, 07:34:15 pm

ok keep your hair on.

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Post by: kevvosa on July 17, 2006, 08:02:23 pm

What if a gust of wind blows it off? 

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Post by: loulou on July 17, 2006, 11:24:27 pm

toupee tape.